RWA Conference – Day 1 (or Day 4 of Vacation)
There is a direct correlation between free Internet and the ability to blog on a regular basis. This post is belated since I didn’t have ongoing access to the Internet, but hopefully it is still a worthwhile read. Enjoy! 
 
I’m sitting out by the pool, surrounded by palm trees and a summer breeze, as I write this blog. Anaheim has some amazing weather, especially for summer.
Yesterday, my writing buddy CJ and I did some networking, attended a book signing, and went to Downtown Disney using a Mickey pass on a transit bus. CJ was quite happy to get her dosage of Mickey, she practically has Mouse-Covered walls. They *did* have mouse ears for benches, which I thought was quite cool!
Today was the “official” start of the conference. Breakfast was more than I expected – decent food but nowhere to really sit. It was like eating breakfast at a cocktail party. After, we began the seminar panels.
Panel 1 – Raising the Stakes for your Characters – by Virna DePaul
GREAT panel, which made me smile because on opening day, the panels can go either way. She was organized, well-spoken, and knowledgeable. I really liked that she used movie references to make her point. She had obviously attended every workshop and retreat on story structure, screenwriting structure, book structure, etc. because she incorporated all that knowledge into an amazing presentation.
Key points:
1. Ratchet up the stakes for your characters. Think “JAWS” music, how it starts slow and ominous and gets faster and faster. That’s what you want with your book.
2. Raising the stakes means something the character can win OR lose. It doesn’t have to be something he/she can lose only.
3. Readers want to experience all the turning points that the character goes through. The beginning, the need to change, the believable reason for the character to step away from an average day to meet his/her goal, and fighting for it until the end.
Panel 2- Show, Don’t Tell
Next came a panel by Janice Hardy about the ever-repeated writer rule: Show, Don’t Tell.
Another great panel! She brought up several words and phrases to be careful of when writing, because often these words tell emotions rather than let the reader experience them. Words such as “she felt happy” doesn’t SHOW us anything, it tells us. Saying “she grinned so wide, her teeth gleamed in the Texas sun” is better.
One key point I really liked from her speech was: If you can’t “act” it out, then you are telling. For example, if you say, “Anger bubbled from her heart.” She had 3 volunteers come up from the audience and try to act out the sentence. They had no idea what to do. However, if the sentence spoke of a woman’s shoulders slumping, her crawling into the fetal position, etc., this helps us “see” the scene more.
The welcome luncheon was a busy experience, as always, but good food and an inspiring speech by Stephanie Laurens. Her main point was that no matter how the e-book revolution may change the distribution and marketing of books, bottom line – we are writers. We are storytellers. Our job is to get the works of emotion to readers, no matter which channel we accomplish that goal.
Panel 3- “Dialogue: It’s More than What You Say” by Julia Quinn
This was probably the most popular panel of the day! I arrived 15 minutes early and there was standing room only. The host managed to get some extra chairs, but otherwise this was a packed panel!
Lots of interesting info, the difference between dialogue tags (such as “she said”) and action tags (such as “Jane walked into the room. Then the dialogue is listed here)
A great day overall.

I now have so much more respect for anyone that can navigate their way around San Francisco airport. We left Napa early, around 8am, to allow time for rush hour. Good thing, the Bay Bridge took forever to get across. But that was the easy part of the commute. The hard part was seeing a sign telling us to get off at San Bruno Blvd, and there were 2 identical looking San Bruno exits. 
You know where this is going. Yes, we took the wrong one.
Ten minutes later, we were back on the freeway and eventually found our way to the rental return. Then for some reason, we had to go to the International Terminal to find our gate, where we were to take a shuttle to our gate. Huh? Go to one gate to take a shuttle to another gate? Apparently so. The SFO airport is under construction so this is the way it works. We managed to get to our “real” gate about 90 minutes before flight departure, so all was well.
After an authentic Chinese food meal, where I imbibed in several beers to calm my pre-flying nerves down, we went on this ramp-looking thing to board the plane. Not the usual tunnel, but a ramp outside. Our plane hadn’t been through puberty yet, hence the need for beer to not go insane. For those who don’t know, I don’t have a problem with flying itself—it’s the taking off and landing that I don’t like. And on a baby plane? Yikes.
To top it off, several musicians boarded the plane with us. One carried a guitar and looked like an older, scruffier Bob Dylan. Others looked like those hair band guys in the 1980s. I found my mind wandering to the story of Ritchie Valens and Buddy Holly (both musicians who died in a plane crash) and I really hoped these particular guys were not famous. That way, nothing would happen to our baby plane.
I was happy to learn that no, they were popular in California but they were not famous, and we landed just fine.
Then came Los Angeles traffic in a taxi to arrive at the conference hotel. I was able to unpack everything, not just the first layer of my suitcase. Felt great. Then we discovered the hotel only has Pepsi products and not Coke, so we walked across the street to the Hilton to buy some coke products. Yay for those hotels who have Diet Coke!
Tomorrow, the conference starts. CJ and I have gone through our bags of free books, schedules, etc. and this looks to be a great year of speakers.
More to follow…

Wow. I am so content right now, I don’t know if I can convey it with words alone. Since I do deem myself a writer, I shall try :)

Today was our full day in Napa, for tomorrow we have to fly to Anaheim for our writer’s conference to begin, so today was the big day when we wanted to see lots of wineries, take tours, and remember this little slice of heaven that is etched into the Earth over here on the West Coast.

We began the day with complementary breakfast from the hotel – again, this place is great. It’s called the Wine Valley Lodge. Nothing super or spectacular about the rooms–it’s very basic though they do have a fridge, microwave, and TV–but the included breakfast, the many rose blooms on the property, and the service make the place very worthwhile. I also like that we are at the South end of Napa, and not in the middle of Napa itself. Gives it a quiet feel.

After breakfast (and of course we woke up super early because we are used to East Coast time), and getting some basic prep done, we began our journey. For those of you who haven’t been to Napa, wineries typically are open 10 am – 5pm, so after our 8am breakfast, we had time to kill. We took a ride through historic Napa and then arrived at Mumm Winery at 10am precisely.

Now hear this: Anyone going to Napa should be at Mumm Winery at 10am on any given day. They offer 10am only, free tours through the property and it includes a history of the wine, the vineyard, the winemaking process, and it is a wealth of knowledge and fun information for anyone. Very, very worthwhile.

Right now, the grapes in Napa are about 3 weeks away from the harvest season, so we were able to see several vines of grapes that were changing color from green to red. Very, very cool.

After our tour of Mumm, we went to their patio (which overlooks the gorgeous vineyard and mountains) for a tasting. Mumm makes sparkling wines (think stuff like Asti Spumante or Brut) and I got the July special – the red, white, and blue. I was completely amazed at the sweetness of the red sparkling wine. It was the Cuvee Red and was absolutely wonderful. In fact, I may order some. Who knew red wine could be sweet, and also be sparkling?

The server also gave me a freebie of Santana sparkling wine, which is, yes, for those of you old rockers like me, IS indeed blended and managed by Carlos Santana, the musician. He apparently became fond of wines and now blends his own. The Santana sparkling wine is some of the best I ever tasted. The man knew how to play guitar, and the man knows how to blend wine.

After a wonderful morning at Mumm, we headed down the road to Silver Oak Winery. It was nice, and I mainly went there because someone from the winery messaged me on Twitter and invited me by for a tasting. The place had an old lighthouse-looking structure out in front, with statues of men reading books, and inside was an interesting set of wines. They had several Cabernets, which honestly I don’t typically like – but they age their Cabernets longer than the standard and that made the taste incredibly smooth.

This is where the lesson in writing comes in: don’t rush things. Items of high quality take time.

I did like that the woman at Silver Oak did take us on a free tour, and there was an entire table and chair set made from old wine barrels. There seems to be a great recycling philosophy here in Napa. Leftover items are churned back into something, be it the Earth, contribution to another product, or something new entirely. Seeing the stained red wood on the homemade chairs out of old barrels was satisfying in more ways than one. My husband is a carpenter, and I took photos to share with him this little tidbit of how things can always change shape and form to create something new :)

After Silver Oak, we went to V Sattui Winery. My parents used to order wines from them, so I was familiar with their selection, but the place is great for lunch, picnicking, and wine tasting.

A warning: do not go on the weekend. I found Monday (today) to be too busy for my taste, but the guy pouring wine said it was a slow day. But they did have amazing sandwiches, salads, etc. and we sat outside in the garden having lunch before tasting some amazing wines.

V Sattui is also family friendly, for anyone traveling with kids.

After that, we went to an old Castle that has been turned into a winery. Very interesting place, with stone structures and dragons carved everywhere. Below is a pic of one of the ornate rooms:

Pic of dragon decor:

My wonderful buddy and writing friend CJ is the one who drove, as she didn’t drink, and I drank happily and didn’t have to worry about driving. I thought often of Casablanca during our Napa day trip today: “This is the beginning of a beautiful friendship.” She is the best writing buddy and vacation colleague I could ask for :)

Toward the end, we went to Andretti Winery. Yes, you read that correctly. Not only does Carlos Santana, ex-musician, make wines, but Mario Andretti, retired race car driver, is into wines as well. He and another Italian friend of his purchased a winery and redid the architecture to resemble a Tuscan villa. I must admit, it was beautiful and I was really impressed. I figured there would be a Ferrari in the back. Instead, there are tables with mosaic tiles where people can sit and sip wine with ornate fountains nearby. Wonderful and relaxing place.

All in all, Napa is fantastic. I couldn’t imagine spending more than 3 days here, as there isn’t much to do other than see wineries and I’ve had my fill after a few days, but the land is gorgeous, the wine is wonderful, and life is extremely, extremely good.

I will leave you all with this note: slow down and enjoy life a little.

Being the inquisitive writer I am, I asked many of the wine tasting reps about their jobs, what it’s like to work in the industry, etc. Many of them gave good answers. But my favorite came from a young woman at the Andretti winery. She said that when she began learning about wine–all its palette pleasing sensations–it forced her to slow down and really relax, enjoy the taste, enjoy the TIME spent relaxing.

I love that.

So go, enjoy yourself no matter what fills your glass. Smell the roses. Here in Napa, they are beautiful beyond belief.

Elaine

Hello all!

As I sit here, in the 65 degree wonderfully chilled hotel room in northern California’s Napa Valley, I am quite content. Figured I would write a blog about it, even!

For those who don’t know, vacation started officially today. The flight to San Fran was about 4 hours and 15 minutes. Surprisingly, I did well. Normally I go a bit wiggy after about 3 hours, but for some reason, this time I was fine. Delta has certainly expanded their service since I last flew them across-country. They have extra goody snacks for sale, along with recent movies and headsets that are a fraction of a movie theater ticket.

No, I didn’t watch one, though I was tempted to watch “The Best Exotic Marigold Hotel” once again. Instead, I read on my Kindle and worked on my writing notes. A good flight, overall.

That was the plane part.

Then we take the “air train.” This is a welcome experience because it is only about 60 degrees in San Fran, and it’s the first spot where there is cool air. It winds us around the airport to the car rental place, and looks like a giant snake curling its way between stops around SFO. 

That was the train part.

The automobile part? A bit more complicated. May I just ask this 1 question of the car rental world – WHY do you rent out cars that are blocked by other cars and can’t be driven? Even if you tell a customer “your car is in space 950”, that doesn’t mean that when you get there, it will be AVAILABLE in space 950.

I swear– I wanted to channel Steve Martin in “Planes, Trains, and Automobiles.” Click here for the video. And warning – bad language for those of you with sensitive ears :)

After much confusion and playing elevator hop for about 30 minutes, we finally got to a replacement car. I suppose our original car is still blocked by 20 others. Who knows? Since our flight had landed 30 minutes early, this helped because by the time we left the San Fran airport, it was probably an hour and a half after we landed. Luggage plus car rental plus delays = ugh.

Then YAY! We go out on 101, head up on 80 North, and make our way to Sonoma Valley Highway – Hwy 29. Then we kind of got lost, but found our way back.

Napa itself, as we entered, was quite a cute little place. Gothic cathedrals, historic town squares, little shopping plazas. Even the Wal-mart building was charming.

We check into our Napa Valley hotel (note: this is 3 hours after we landed) and then go out for some tastings around Napa. And we promptly get lost as we try to find our way to a winery. Even though grapes and vineyards surround us on both sides, we can’t seem to find the right road we are looking for! 

Eventually we find our way back, and head toward some recommended wineries. THIS is the good part!  Before we reach the first one, I look to the left and see a beautiful Southwestern-looking building with tile roofing and Mayan Sun ironwork in the front (who wouldn’t like Mayan Sun stuff?) and I say with a happy glee, “Oooh, that one!”

Carol swerves left and we go to our first winery. It’s called Luna winery, which I find cool because Luna is also the name of one of my granddogs, so there’s a hidden meaning there. It is the first winery we walk into, it’s the first experience of Napa, and it is the highlight of my day. Most wine tastings charge a modest fee for tasting a variety of wines, and because it was my first winery, they gave me 7 tastes for the price of 5. Not only that, but they answered my questions about what it’s like to work in the business (ahhh, book research. It’s a wonderful thing!) and I found the place beautiful.

View from the balcony (with a taste of Merlot)

Around taste #4 of a Merlot, she recommends we take our wine upstairs to their tower balcony, which overlooks the vineyard. We do. It is beautiful. This is when my breath is taken away and I realize how glad I am to be here.

Yes, all the travel and hustle and bustle was worth it. To drink from the fruit on the vine, while overlooking the vines shadowed by gorgeous mountains – – yes, this is great.

We do try a few more but they close at 5p so we pick up snacks and head back to the hotel. Tomorrow, Monday, is a full day of seeing things, and we plan to do a special lunch at one of the local fave wineries.

Hope you and yours are doing well, and if you have any wine in your fridge, raise a glass and enjoy!

Elaine

I’m dog-sitting one of my grand-dogs today, Chella. She apparently was running after something at full speed and slammed into a picnic table’s edge. Ouchy!

After numerous meds and some stitches by the vet, now she is required to take it easy and rest. So far, she seems to be pretty out of it. This is a good thing, because if she starts to get fussy and tries to rip out her stitches, then I have to put the “cone of shame” on her. You know, one of those funny looking lampshade things that prevent dogs from harming themselves. In Pixar’s movie “UP”, there was an adorable dog character who so aptly named this “the cone of shame.”

So, with my Diet Coke in hand, I am ready and prepared for anything…

For those of you who can access video, watch the few seconds of “UP” talking about the cone of shame :)